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Just like I used to
The pain in my heart
Is a new kind of art
I hate the way
Your smile is like the month of May
With your sun in my eyes
I canít see the clear skies
My friend used to say to find someone good
And for some reason I never thought that I would
The way that you say
Not to let the clouds go grey
Then the next day
Your words were a betray
Every day it hurts my heart
For me to play my little part
The part of the tough one
The one always looking into the sun
I might just have to say goodbye
So I will be able to look into the clear sky
I will love you from afar
And all I can do I wish upon a star
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Her Smile

Contributed by Jessi95 on Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 07:31:03 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



She smiles at you
Just like I used to
The pain in my heart
Is a new kind of art
I hate the way
Your smile is like the month of May
With your sun in my eyes
I canít see the clear skies
My friend used to say to find someone good
And for some reason I never thought that I would
The way that you say
Not to let the clouds go grey
Then the next day
Your words were a betray
Every day it hurts my heart
For me to play my little part
The part of the tough one
The one always looking into the sun
I might just have to say goodbye
So I will be able to look into the clear sky
I will love you from afar
And all I can do I wish upon a star




Copyright © Jessi95 ... [ 2010-04-22 19:31:03]
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Re: Her Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 07:47:55 PM AEST
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Great poem full of emotion. I like the rhyme and emotion a great deal here.

Heidi


Re: Her Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Nevilleconnie on Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 08:06:13 PM AEST
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Very, very good. Your poems make my eye's tear because there so heartbreaking.


Re: Her Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Friday, 23rd April 2010 @ 01:25:33 AM AEST
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love is a gift it cannot be thrown away. do not throw your love it will return.


Re: Her Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 23rd April 2010 @ 06:22:39 PM AEST
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I can feel the emotional swell of this one very clearly.
Sad but moving.
Well written.

Steve




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