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Array ( [sid] => 172897 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => almost Defeated-but not quite [time] => 2012-06-08 01:51:03 [hometext] => The journey easy or difficult [bodytext] => Dear father,
I find myself in this trial that is so strained to endure
But i know i will make it through for sure
I take two steps forward and often timeís 5 steps back again
I canít wait for this trial to end
I donít know what Iím doing wrong, i donít understand what message Iím supposed to get
Itís been months and i still havenít got it yet
Going around in circles making the same the same mistakes over again
Hurting and suffering within
Being underappreciated for what i do, like itís my obligation not thereís
In the end it seems when it comes to me no one truly cares
Talked down to and disrespected like Iím Joe some on the street
Though Iím not defeated i Iím feeling beat
Down in a life that is continuing to pass me by
God why am i subjected to these kinds of trials, but i have no more tears to cry
I just simply laugh, cos itís all i can do, i have nothing, Iím just a robot going through
Chaos and confusion constantly dear God please tell me what to do
As i wait here humbly and patiently for you

Written by Shirley record
Date 4/5/2012

I wrote this because at that moment this is how i was feeling, almost but not quite
Defeated. Anybody that thinks they can do anything without God is a liar unto themselves
Though our fate remains the same the journey to complete Gods task he has set forth
For us changes constantly because of the decisions we make, we make the choice to make
The journey easy or difficult. Anyone who doesnít believe that is a liar unto themselves
Each journey is different. But all predetermined
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 21 [informant] => desire [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
almost Defeated-but not quite

Contributed by desire on Friday, 8th June 2012 @ 01:51:03 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Dear father,
I find myself in this trial that is so strained to endure
But i know i will make it through for sure
I take two steps forward and often timeís 5 steps back again
I canít wait for this trial to end
I donít know what Iím doing wrong, i donít understand what message Iím supposed to get
Itís been months and i still havenít got it yet
Going around in circles making the same the same mistakes over again
Hurting and suffering within
Being underappreciated for what i do, like itís my obligation not thereís
In the end it seems when it comes to me no one truly cares
Talked down to and disrespected like Iím Joe some on the street
Though Iím not defeated i Iím feeling beat
Down in a life that is continuing to pass me by
God why am i subjected to these kinds of trials, but i have no more tears to cry
I just simply laugh, cos itís all i can do, i have nothing, Iím just a robot going through
Chaos and confusion constantly dear God please tell me what to do
As i wait here humbly and patiently for you

Written by Shirley record
Date 4/5/2012

I wrote this because at that moment this is how i was feeling, almost but not quite
Defeated. Anybody that thinks they can do anything without God is a liar unto themselves
Though our fate remains the same the journey to complete Gods task he has set forth
For us changes constantly because of the decisions we make, we make the choice to make
The journey easy or difficult. Anyone who doesnít believe that is a liar unto themselves
Each journey is different. But all predetermined




Copyright © desire ... [ 2012-06-08 01:51:03]
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Re: almost Defeated-but not quite (User Rating: 1 )
by thehotshotpoet on Friday, 8th June 2012 @ 04:50:25 PM AEST
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desire,the journey is never easy nor will it end unless you give up & from your words I dont see you being ready to give up.very nice work
thanks for sharing
the hot shot poet




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