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Contributed by legato29 on Saturday, 17th October 2015 @ 10:49:09 PM in AEST
Topic: insomniac

Dream with me a dream that never ends;
where no one cries and no one makes amends.
Into this dream with me will you ascend?
Or sleepless be and into hell descend?

Copyright © legato29 ... [ 2015-10-17 22:49:09]
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Re: Insomnia (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Monday, 19th October 2015 @ 06:28:05 AM AEST
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I think some minor touch-ups, just for the sake of flow would be nice, like a suggestion akin to this:
"Or sleepless be and into hell should/would you descend?"
It would give it a sort of playful "sing-song" style too. Just a thought.

But outside out of that, I enjoy it. The only thing I wonder, is if "no one makes amends" is because no one cries, because they don't have to, or the two are irrelevant. Either way, it sounds like a happy dream. I'll look forward to such a place tonight. :)


Re: Insomnia (User Rating: 1 )
by blknwht on Monday, 19th October 2015 @ 11:05:04 AM AEST
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I can relate.. I want to dream the same dream... I can see it.. I can feel it... I love how short and to the point this poem is... keep writing, and get some sleep!

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