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Lofty Skies

Contributed by flex4life13 on Tuesday, 27th October 2015 @ 04:14:48 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous

While beneath them, billows categorizing into groups.
Two souls aboard a 747, they quarrel.
As above, so bellow, hazes justified as poofs.
As aboard, two depths, dispensing of morals.
Mitigations, half-harms, achieving not a compromise.
Faulty accusations, un-disarmed cravings behind sweltering eyes.
Piercing rays of an endangered sun, how exquisite its waves as we only have one.
Yet, she examines the visor as she slowly pulls it down,
what a shame to deny its warmth, our taken for granted sun.
Must I trigger sentiment?, actuating the vigor in stride,
while she leans back ,unaware of the timid beast inside.
Now I to quell her reticence no longer, I of vital cravenness.
She to fall victim to the stronger, the stronger of indifference.

Copyright © flex4life13 ... [ 2015-10-27 16:14:48]
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Re: Lofty Skies (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Tuesday, 27th October 2015 @ 10:02:14 PM AEST
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Boy, you packed this poem up.
What a wordy well chosen write.
Very dense with good flow and very unique indeed.


Re: Lofty Skies (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 2nd November 2015 @ 03:26:45 AM AEST
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beautifully penned,

hugs n' love nessa

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