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Im fine, really...

Contributed by softerware on Wednesday, 1st June 2016 @ 07:51:30 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The engine roars to life;
Into the night we fly;
The headlights turn to spikey stars.
The signs are whizzing by;

The amber stripes become a smear;
The road an endless loop;
Beneath my wheels they disappear;
Behind me they regroup.

Cars flash lights and honk at me;
But Ive no cause for worry;
I have to slow to read the signs;
Most of which are blurry.

They told me this was dangerous;
A myth that I debunked;
By counting on your vigilance;
So I could drive home drunk.

Copyright © softerware ... [ 2016-06-01 19:51:30]
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Re: Im fine, really... (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Thursday, 2nd June 2016 @ 08:31:36 AM AEST
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Surprise ending! Really cool.


Re: Im fine, really... (User Rating: 1 )
by hray42 on Friday, 3rd June 2016 @ 02:45:05 AM AEST
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Oh WoW!! That was comical!! I love the little "twist" at the end.. Just as Invernio did.. Although I must say, I kind of knew where it was going.. LOL.. Funny!!!

Re: Im fine, really... (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Friday, 3rd June 2016 @ 07:41:48 AM AEST
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Re: Im fine, really... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 4th June 2016 @ 11:54:27 PM AEST
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I love how you do not use
an apostrophe
no longer

oh how I imagine the headlights
as they flicker from the highway
traffic in the midday sun

past way past the empty
gasoline stations
And bars

in the dark
alone one by one

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