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::O save your 5th til after the 4th

Contributed by ladyfawn on Monday, 4th July 2016 @ 12:28:31 AM in AEST
Topic: Patriotic

O such trouble, trouble is what we have
right here in america, home of the brave,
globalization forces wanting to control us
government believing our money is porous,
from beautiful sea to beautiful shining sea
quiet mists rising over mountain majesties,

patriots celebrate the red, white, and blue
liberals burning flags ------- off me n you,
a lighter who torches should move far away
from usa sunshine to darkness where they-
will no longer be living under freedom and
learning that foolish lies n lives have to pay,

O those liberals want to cuddle, love n hug
those that scream, death to america- thugs,
who say what they mean, mean what they say
it is not, my dear lovely infidel have a nice day
unicorn rainbow riders fell off the peace train
millennial hippies, no such creature exists in

damn liberals who believe killing babies is fine
must take your guns! save one life!- no mind,
a generation so violent so angry so safe spacy
from day cares screaming loudest for attention,
out now in the streets burning flags crying racist
so mindless history repeats but patriots will resist,

O criminals prefer unarmed citizens in gun free
zones- in all, each, and every country theyll be,
as the fireworks pop exploding skies of freedom
children with sparklers, babies in strollers, as men-
take last breaths in far away long ago battlefields
their spirits quietly wonder is americas fate sealed.

) *
(. (..✿.✿

Copyright © ladyfawn ... [ 2016-07-04 00:28:31]
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Re: ::O save your 5th til after the 4th (User Rating: 1 )
by wheels on Monday, 4th July 2016 @ 08:13:08 AM AEST
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Some poignant observations - freedoms stripped every day

Re: ::O save your 5th til after the 4th (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 5th July 2016 @ 02:36:37 AM AEST
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Right on, Nessa!!!!

Re: ::O save your 5th til after the 4th (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Tuesday, 5th July 2016 @ 09:31:48 PM AEST
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Impressive strength in passion, design, and some fantastic imagery. While I won/'/t see eye to eye in many instances, I can say so much as, it/'/s not as bad as you think in some places, and worse than any of us can imagine in the places where we can/'/t. Outside that, we need some cultural, economic, and political revolution. :D
Great write, and all the best,

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