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Cupid Burning

Contributed by duff on Saturday, 10th September 2016 @ 01:59:15 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

In hearts lie our assassin

Quiet bow and arrow tart

Ready to fire upon caress

Stifle red to ride in ashes

Mascara her river running

The lips touch hurt and die

Roses abandoned by water

A mirror breaking his hand

Hotel key on the dark side

Chocolate cards melting

The angel without dinner

Served by another knife

Copyright © duff ... [ 2016-09-10 13:59:15]
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Re: Cupid Burning (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Sunday, 11th September 2016 @ 10:56:31 AM AEST
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Your imagery is so acute that it leads us along the tale like the pages of a book in the wind! Quick, crisp, and vivid snapshots in staccato, inviting readers to add the background colors.
A most interesting style you have left for us here!
A tale you conspire to write with those who read it.
Enjoyable, and hard to resist!

Re: Cupid Burning (User Rating: 1 )
by ammar on Tuesday, 13th September 2016 @ 03:39:11 PM AEST
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This is a very enjoyable piece. It is rich in imagery and leaves the reader pondering over what/'/s been written.

Re: Cupid Burning (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 14th September 2016 @ 02:34:26 PM AEST
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Woah. Dark and delicious. I like this a lot!
Well done on the visuals. Great job capturing the mood. Keep it up!


Re: Cupid Burning (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Wednesday, 21st September 2016 @ 11:10:25 AM AEST
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You are becoming my favorite. "a mirror breaking his hand" genius!
And not to make less of "Mascara her river running"


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