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Array ( [sid] => 183868 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Worthy of You [time] => 2016-12-27 17:11:26 [hometext] => Wifey and I are rock solid, but the subject is ripe for writing. (The Talking Heads never burnt down a house) [bodytext] =>
As the night moves around us,
I’m pouring my heart out…to you,
someday you’ll see how I see myself
so, I’m showin’ you now,
there ain’t nothin’ else, I can do…

Now the pen that I’m holdin,
on papers’
unfoldin’
my fears
I’m layin’ out,
and not a minute to soon….
Here’s the real me
right here beside you,
I want you to see,
in the light of the moon.

My love, is deeper,
than it’s ever been before;
I love you, my lover,
my wife, my friend and more…
It’s funny, you say,
you’re afraid I won’t stay,
when I feel that way
just the same….
Oh, just the same.

This sadness in me,
has worn down a piece
of my heart.
And I try not to show it,
but I think that you know it,
this hurt,
that only you see.

When I met you,
I learned what a man,
a real man should act like and be…
well I failed that test,
n’ you know, the rest,
and now I’m left wonderin’,
through the pain in me thunderin’,
why in the hell
are you still with me?

Hush,
my baby,
our magic that floated, on trust,
it no longer flies,
before I blew it
away,
in the haze of so many lies…
so many lies.

Yeah, the cracks in my framework,
though you deny it,
have they left you
wonderin’ why?
And my smiles that warmed you,
so long ago,
I swear are the same
as today’s,
I want you to know,
and I pray that you’ll give me,
a life time to show you,
Oh,
I wish,
I wasn’t,
so broken,
inside……
this life’s been a hell of a ride…
...a hell of a ride.

and you/'/ve got to know, love,
believe me,
what I’m sayin’ is true,
I’ll never give up,
tryin’ to be,
a man worthy of you...
worthy of you…
a man worthy of you.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 115 [topic] => 50 [informant] => invierno [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )
Worthy of You

Contributed by invierno on Tuesday, 27th December 2016 @ 05:11:26 PM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry




As the night moves around us,
I’m pouring my heart out…to you,
someday you’ll see how I see myself
so, I’m showin’ you now,
there ain’t nothin’ else, I can do…

Now the pen that I’m holdin,
on papers’
unfoldin’
my fears
I’m layin’ out,
and not a minute to soon….
Here’s the real me
right here beside you,
I want you to see,
in the light of the moon.

My love, is deeper,
than it’s ever been before;
I love you, my lover,
my wife, my friend and more…
It’s funny, you say,
you’re afraid I won’t stay,
when I feel that way
just the same….
Oh, just the same.

This sadness in me,
has worn down a piece
of my heart.
And I try not to show it,
but I think that you know it,
this hurt,
that only you see.

When I met you,
I learned what a man,
a real man should act like and be…
well I failed that test,
n’ you know, the rest,
and now I’m left wonderin’,
through the pain in me thunderin’,
why in the hell
are you still with me?

Hush,
my baby,
our magic that floated, on trust,
it no longer flies,
before I blew it
away,
in the haze of so many lies…
so many lies.

Yeah, the cracks in my framework,
though you deny it,
have they left you
wonderin’ why?
And my smiles that warmed you,
so long ago,
I swear are the same
as today’s,
I want you to know,
and I pray that you’ll give me,
a life time to show you,
Oh,
I wish,
I wasn’t,
so broken,
inside……
this life’s been a hell of a ride…
...a hell of a ride.

and you/'/ve got to know, love,
believe me,
what I’m sayin’ is true,
I’ll never give up,
tryin’ to be,
a man worthy of you...
worthy of you…
a man worthy of you.




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Re: Worthy of You (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Wednesday, 28th December 2016 @ 12:15:10 AM AEST
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Excellent flow on ever lasting love
never stop looking for the magic.....


Re: Worthy of You (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Wednesday, 28th December 2016 @ 10:49:58 AM AEST
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Awesome poem Mike.......
You really can/'/t do better than this!

James


Re: Worthy of You (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 31st December 2016 @ 11:47:27 AM AEST
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Spill the deets to us sycophants...See? I remember what you affectionately call us poets here...😊
This sycophant would like to know how you posted this without falling victim to the forward slash that curses the rest of us.

P.s did you ever finish that book? I never heard back from you after you requested my feedback.

Hope it worked out. Please do share how you managed to beat the system here. Thanks.



~Scorp





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