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I/'/ll never do you any harm
Even though
Thoughts of you will never
Keep me warm
Just the vision of your face
Puts me in a very dark place
Once I had mad love for you
But you wouldn/'/t see it through
It was so easy for you to say goodbye
As if you didn/'/t even have to try
Even though I crumbled up deep inside
You could never take away my pride
At times you made me feel so small
But I always gave you my all

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Unlike You

Contributed by jamesstockdale on Tuesday, 5th September 2017 @ 09:28:15 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished



Unlike you
I/'/ll never do you any harm
Even though
Thoughts of you will never
Keep me warm
Just the vision of your face
Puts me in a very dark place
Once I had mad love for you
But you wouldn/'/t see it through
It was so easy for you to say goodbye
As if you didn/'/t even have to try
Even though I crumbled up deep inside
You could never take away my pride
At times you made me feel so small
But I always gave you my all





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Re: Unlike You (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Tuesday, 5th September 2017 @ 11:32:25 AM AEST
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Ive been in this place so many times whether it was before I got married as well as after. Its still something that I struggle with from time to time because from the sounds of it just like you if something is important to me and means the world to me I will just in with both feet without testing the water first and give it my all regardless. Great write my friend.

Rich


Re: Unlike You (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Tuesday, 5th September 2017 @ 06:04:23 PM AEST
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All we can give is our best. That is all we have.
You know of what you speak James; it comes through in your sincere words.
Its important to share. Someone needs to hear this right now!
Your gift is the wonderful hope your poetry brings . We are, by your generousity, not alone.
softerware


Re: Unlike You (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Monday, 11th September 2017 @ 03:30:41 PM AEST
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The thoughts of how we were treated by those we truly did care for constantly haunt us......


Re: Unlike You (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 11th September 2017 @ 10:05:33 PM AEST
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I relate to this. it/'/s lovely.


Re: Unlike You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 31st August 2020 @ 08:49:32 AM AEST
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//Here we are again. I even had to take a deep breath after I read it because I started thinking of my wife.

Great write, TimmyJimmy.

Dugan




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