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You Bring Me Down

Contributed by jamesstockdale on Wednesday, 15th May 2019 @ 12:41:08 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished



You bring me down when you`re around
Give me pause without cause
Make me feel small when I`m tall

When you walk downtown
No one dares to be around
You can make even a lonely clown frown

Make noise from no sound
Loneliness turns to happiness
When you`re not around




Copyright © jamesstockdale ... [ 2019-05-15 12:41:08]
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Re: You Bring Me Down (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Wednesday, 15th May 2019 @ 04:19:31 PM AEST
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You poem reminds me of a saying that goes SOME PEOPLE BRIGHTEN A ROOM WHEN THEY ENTER IT; SOME WHEN THEY LEAVE.
Sounds like your referring to the later, and true to your writing style, we all know someone like that.
softerware


Re: You Bring Me Down (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Wednesday, 15th May 2019 @ 07:57:11 PM AEST
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"Make noise from no sound". What a brilliant line.

I dont know if this a memory or current, but if now, maybe a change is in order.

Invierno


Re: You Bring Me Down (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Saturday, 18th May 2019 @ 07:15:35 PM AEST
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some people have that affect on us
keep your distance
if you can...


Re: You Bring Me Down (User Rating: 1 )
by thelaststraw on Wednesday, 22nd May 2019 @ 05:07:28 PM AEST
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Interesting piece like how you express your feelings.
By the way you thought you were my senior you are if your over 70. LoL Nice write


Re: You Bring Me Down (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 25th August 2020 @ 05:18:33 AM AEST
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// Duh-am, that person sounds like a bundle of joy. Tell us how you really feel, Jimmy.

Definitely dripping with scathing sarcasm. Too Cool.

Thanks,

Dugan




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