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Just Two Falling Stars

Contributed by jamesstockdale on Monday, 18th November 2019 @ 02:35:08 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Grounded by gravity
But known to float in your depravity
Don`t throw me a lifeline
If I drown, I`ll be fine
Beats dying on the vine
Our stars no longer shine bright
As your darkness divides the light
We`re just two falling stars
Passing in the night

Copyright © jamesstockdale ... [ 2019-11-18 14:35:08]
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Re: Just Two Falling Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by n2dep2care on Monday, 18th November 2019 @ 03:33:28 PM AEST
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I like this a lot! Try using "floating in your depravity" for the seconf stance.

"As darkness divides the light" it makes it sound less judgmental and places the blame on both people. Just a suggestion. Really good poem!

Re: Just Two Falling Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Tuesday, 19th November 2019 @ 11:16:22 PM AEST
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yes yes
watering a dead plant is useless
time to move on
let me go
I feel ya brother.....

Re: Just Two Falling Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 3rd March 2020 @ 10:33:03 PM AEST
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Aaaa, she/'/s a ***** anyway. 🙂 Short, bitterly sweet and great flow, Joe, er, Jimmy.

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