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Shatter
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
on
Saturday, 19th September 2020 @ 10:34:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I can’t believe what my eyes can see
feel you fluttering so silently
I’ll hold my breath
remember not to hold on too tight
‘cause so few things in life are just right
but hope whispers
I imagine what it would be like
just to see that dream within my sights
I don’t dare speak
‘cause secrets, they keep you safe sometimes
any other choice would risk that I
might
just
shatter
Copyright ©
MoonlitAngel
... [
2020-09-19 22:34:07]
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Re: Shatter
(User Rating: 1 )
by Aurelia on
Sunday, 20th September 2020 @ 12:19:59 AM AEST
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| The spacing on the last few lines is brilliant, suspenseful. |
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Re: Shatter
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by Voice of the Silent on
Sunday, 20th September 2020 @ 06:07:23 AM AEST
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Never good to be at a breaking point. I feel like I/'/m more duct tape and glue by this point. Great read hope
to read more soon
-voice |
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Re: Shatter
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 8th January 2021 @ 10:49:12 PM AEST
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I/'/ve been gone for a long time, and scrolling down, your name was familiar.
This was a nice poem to come back to. It/'/s soft and gently, hopeful, and flows so well.
Wonderfully done.
David |
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