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Array ( [sid] => 45519 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Behind the Closed Door [time] => 2004-04-30 00:41:05 [hometext] => Group Writes are started in the forums, and once finished added here. Please feel free to join in, or contact the moderators for more information. (The poem is set out with the contributing author's name above their contribution to this group write.) [bodytext] => In order of appearance--
Jellybellyprincess, Jackee_line, Daniela_Maria_Violin, face-in-the-crowd, MoonlitAngel, eternallyloved, Happiness, venkat, kalika_vidya, lostinmyself, Putteragain, Avarice_Riot

"Behind the Closed Door"

Slightly confused he lies there motionless
staring blindly into the eyes of his love
devotion so very unconditional and true,
consistently evolving and becoming less blue.
A fervent love mixed with the tears he displays
shedding irony by the gallon savage untruths
searching for the pearls in the depths
of on-looking eyes. Sparkling emotion drifting
away from her visions of their exquisite
times intrude upon his mind,
making him crave her touch,
Secretly craving so much more.
To quench the thirst of burning fire,
raging in passion's veins He looks to the lips
whispering a silent song,
Breath of love that gently caresses his being
with warmth he forgets the cold and lonely nights
now that she forever complete completely in love
He stretches out time as if tempting the phantasms
found about this great foreboding air, wrapping
Himself in the sweet embrace of his dream like love. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 400 [topic] => 45 [informant] => YPDC_Group_Writes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => group )
Behind the Closed Door

Contributed by YPDC_Group_Writes on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:41:05 AM in AEST
Topic: group



In order of appearance--
Jellybellyprincess, Jackee_line, Daniela_Maria_Violin, face-in-the-crowd, MoonlitAngel, eternallyloved, Happiness, venkat, kalika_vidya, lostinmyself, Putteragain, Avarice_Riot

"Behind the Closed Door"

Slightly confused he lies there motionless
staring blindly into the eyes of his love
devotion so very unconditional and true,
consistently evolving and becoming less blue.
A fervent love mixed with the tears he displays
shedding irony by the gallon savage untruths
searching for the pearls in the depths
of on-looking eyes. Sparkling emotion drifting
away from her visions of their exquisite
times intrude upon his mind,
making him crave her touch,
Secretly craving so much more.
To quench the thirst of burning fire,
raging in passion's veins He looks to the lips
whispering a silent song,
Breath of love that gently caresses his being
with warmth he forgets the cold and lonely nights
now that she forever complete completely in love
He stretches out time as if tempting the phantasms
found about this great foreboding air, wrapping
Himself in the sweet embrace of his dream like love.




Copyright © YPDC_Group_Writes ... [ 2004-04-30 00:41:05]
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Re: Behind the Closed Door (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:44:40 AM AEST
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GREAT JOB! EVERYONE!

Lindsey


Re: Behind the Closed Door (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:49:52 AM AEST
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Ye..Girls..Beautiful spirits of YPDC..you have have made it a dazzling diamond.your poetry shines well...Best wishes to all of you.:-)venkat


Re: Behind the Closed Door (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 01:18:36 AM AEST
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~:*exquisite*:~ an enchantingly beautiful poem, big hugs n' love to all:) nessa

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