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Array ( [sid] => 67425 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Forgiveness [time] => 2004-10-14 14:08:20 [hometext] => After a few Months of writer's Block I think I've broken through, I do hopr you enjoy it. The Phantom [bodytext] => Lost in time, wandering through this maze within my mind,
Turn the corner, another dead end, back track but yet the maze shifted again,
Which way to go, I haven't a clue, lost within my mind searching for you,

Memories of the past, pain from a heartbreak that tends to last,
In search of shelter but there's none to find, seeking closer for a heart that's blind,
Calculated and cold, the mind slowly desect the soul,

Like an inmate I'm locked away, being tortured by a demon each and everyday,
Pulling at the bars trying to escape, realizing I'm lost somewhere between time and space,
Hope begains to fade, feeling as if I'll never be saved,

Look into the mirror at those eyes of shame, Knowing there's no one else in this world to blame,
I'm the one that caused this mess, so now I'm the one who needs to confess,
If you don't know, you are my heart, and with out you I would fall apart,

So here I am to face my fate, asking you to clear the slate,
From your path I have strayed, I pray you will gather my soul and light the way,
Only you have the power to heal a wounded soul, and so I place myself in your hands to hold.

Forever Faithful
The Phantom [comments] => 3 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 48 [informant] => The_Phantom [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Forgiveness

Contributed by The_Phantom on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 02:08:20 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Lost in time, wandering through this maze within my mind,
Turn the corner, another dead end, back track but yet the maze shifted again,
Which way to go, I haven't a clue, lost within my mind searching for you,

Memories of the past, pain from a heartbreak that tends to last,
In search of shelter but there's none to find, seeking closer for a heart that's blind,
Calculated and cold, the mind slowly desect the soul,

Like an inmate I'm locked away, being tortured by a demon each and everyday,
Pulling at the bars trying to escape, realizing I'm lost somewhere between time and space,
Hope begains to fade, feeling as if I'll never be saved,

Look into the mirror at those eyes of shame, Knowing there's no one else in this world to blame,
I'm the one that caused this mess, so now I'm the one who needs to confess,
If you don't know, you are my heart, and with out you I would fall apart,

So here I am to face my fate, asking you to clear the slate,
From your path I have strayed, I pray you will gather my soul and light the way,
Only you have the power to heal a wounded soul, and so I place myself in your hands to hold.

Forever Faithful
The Phantom




Copyright © The_Phantom ... [ 2004-10-14 14:08:20]
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Re: Forgiveness (User Rating: 1 )
by SkaterGirl16 on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 04:36:52 PM AEST
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Nicely written! Glad the writers block is gone. ^_^


Re: Forgiveness (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 05:05:12 PM AEST
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Oh Matt!!!!! I am so happy to see you again and to know that you're ok..and have gotten over your block....with this beautiful piece....
I sent you birthday greetings but didn't know if you received it.... if not, belated Birthday Greetings.... I have missed you terribly.... and so glad to see you her again.....
Hugs to you and Tracie...
Your island friend, Jenni


Re: Forgiveness (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 10:32:55 PM AEST
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Yes Happy Belated Matt! Welcome! So glad youre back! Well done on the poem! Christina




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