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Array ( [sid] => 71380 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Passing By [time] => 2004-11-13 22:59:02 [hometext] => I pray to God, but sometimes I wonder if he even listens anymore.. R.I.P. MOM(01-16-03) and DAD(02-02-04).. [bodytext] => Sitting here thinking how messed up life is today
All the dreams Iíve ever had come shattering down
Iím happy for you because no good will come with me in your life
Iím this dark bomb shell with voodoos
I get speechless and scared and lonesome almost all the time
I need someone who doesnít exist
God has a plan
But he must of forgotten about his plans for me
He forgot to make a love thatíd love me
Wish I could wake up with your warmth
Fall asleep with you in my arms
But I find it pointless to dream for things I can never have
Why must I torment myself with the facts?
I want to be with you
But you canít look past all this and see me for what I am
Somewhere inside myself,
Iím beautiful, strong, and unafraid.
I want to be someone who is everything and more
I want to be the person who makes everyone smile
I wish for a day that I know cannot ever come
I want to be happy,
I want my mom to hold me and tell me that love will find me
I wish my dad could tuck me in tonight
I want for life to be unreal
I want to wake up from this surreal day and break away
Everything in life has something good in it
I find it hard for others to find that bliss in me
Iím the stranger,
The outcast in the classroom
Iím the girl who knows the books but fails from distractions
The one who awaits for a miracle in life
I want to be loved, for I have a passionate heart
Wishing youíd take my hand and kiss me
Without any demands
I wish for the one who knows how to treat me, unconditionally
Iím wishing for the day someone has as much interest in me
As Iíve found in many others
Iím wising God would bestow upon me a soul mate,
A friend,
A kind heart,
To show me all the greatness that Iím loosing track of
I want someone who makes my skin crawl
Someone who sends chills down my spine
I want someoneís honest love
I want someone, something, anything..
To take my pain away
I want someone who doesnít just pass me by
I want someone who calls to just see how Iím doing with my life
I want someone who is good for me
I want someone who cares enough to tell me no
I want someone who doesnít exist
I want someone who could never love me
I want someone who cares less about me than anyone else
I want someone, something, anything..
I want what God wonít grant me

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 33 [informant] => Fairy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )
Passing By

Contributed by Fairy on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 10:59:02 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove



Sitting here thinking how messed up life is today
All the dreams Iíve ever had come shattering down
Iím happy for you because no good will come with me in your life
Iím this dark bomb shell with voodoos
I get speechless and scared and lonesome almost all the time
I need someone who doesnít exist
God has a plan
But he must of forgotten about his plans for me
He forgot to make a love thatíd love me
Wish I could wake up with your warmth
Fall asleep with you in my arms
But I find it pointless to dream for things I can never have
Why must I torment myself with the facts?
I want to be with you
But you canít look past all this and see me for what I am
Somewhere inside myself,
Iím beautiful, strong, and unafraid.
I want to be someone who is everything and more
I want to be the person who makes everyone smile
I wish for a day that I know cannot ever come
I want to be happy,
I want my mom to hold me and tell me that love will find me
I wish my dad could tuck me in tonight
I want for life to be unreal
I want to wake up from this surreal day and break away
Everything in life has something good in it
I find it hard for others to find that bliss in me
Iím the stranger,
The outcast in the classroom
Iím the girl who knows the books but fails from distractions
The one who awaits for a miracle in life
I want to be loved, for I have a passionate heart
Wishing youíd take my hand and kiss me
Without any demands
I wish for the one who knows how to treat me, unconditionally
Iím wishing for the day someone has as much interest in me
As Iíve found in many others
Iím wising God would bestow upon me a soul mate,
A friend,
A kind heart,
To show me all the greatness that Iím loosing track of
I want someone who makes my skin crawl
Someone who sends chills down my spine
I want someoneís honest love
I want someone, something, anything..
To take my pain away
I want someone who doesnít just pass me by
I want someone who calls to just see how Iím doing with my life
I want someone who is good for me
I want someone who cares enough to tell me no
I want someone who doesnít exist
I want someone who could never love me
I want someone who cares less about me than anyone else
I want someone, something, anything..
I want what God wonít grant me





Copyright © Fairy ... [ 2004-11-13 22:59:02]
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Re: Passing By (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 09:26:03 PM AEST
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as you search for him
thus does he for you
thinking also
to himself
" alas she does not exist "
perhaps in his torment
he stumbles
forlorn
for her
that is not born
take heart
and perhaps will he
but never revealed
to eyes that won't see

loved your poem and related to it very strongly for it is as if you have revealed my own unwritten thoughts


Re: Passing By (User Rating: 1 )
by n2dep2care on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 04:42:00 PM AEST
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This touched my heart very deeply. Wonderful write with raw emotions. I love this poem!

Laurie




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