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God saw She was too kind to all
And hurt She did not need
So he put his arm's around Her
And whispered, come with me.
A golden heart stopped beating
An Angel now at work
God broke our hearts to prove to us
He only takes the best.
The hurting Angels on Earth
Are alway's needing rest.
So think of all the times you hurt
And She was there to help
Think of all the Love She gave
And all the Hurt She felt
Think of how Kind She was
And when She was here and near.
She was put on Earth to Love and Cherish,
And when She did not call
That means She hurt too much
To even talk at all.
She needed some Love in Return,
That She gave to all.
She needed someone to understand
And to release her from this pain....
So She turned to God,
And…cried out in vain....
God saw his Angel Weep and Cry,
And Hurt so much inside,
He saw all the Love She spread
And how She was unread.
He saw how her feeling's hurt.....
And Need Not Say....
He lended out a hand
And She went on her way.....
He brought Her back above
And there She now stay's.
So Remember all the Love She has,
And Remember of all Her ways.
If you remember this
Then you'll remember what she'll Say;
"As Long as you Love them in your heart,
They’ll never fade away!"
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(((_ANGEL-ANJIL-JILL_)))

Contributed by jillian_phan on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 04:23:56 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



(((_ANGEL-ANJIL-JILL_)))

God saw She was too kind to all
And hurt She did not need
So he put his arm's around Her
And whispered, come with me.
A golden heart stopped beating
An Angel now at work
God broke our hearts to prove to us
He only takes the best.
The hurting Angels on Earth
Are alway's needing rest.
So think of all the times you hurt
And She was there to help
Think of all the Love She gave
And all the Hurt She felt
Think of how Kind She was
And when She was here and near.
She was put on Earth to Love and Cherish,
And when She did not call
That means She hurt too much
To even talk at all.
She needed some Love in Return,
That She gave to all.
She needed someone to understand
And to release her from this pain....
So She turned to God,
And…cried out in vain....
God saw his Angel Weep and Cry,
And Hurt so much inside,
He saw all the Love She spread
And how She was unread.
He saw how her feeling's hurt.....
And Need Not Say....
He lended out a hand
And She went on her way.....
He brought Her back above
And there She now stay's.
So Remember all the Love She has,
And Remember of all Her ways.
If you remember this
Then you'll remember what she'll Say;
"As Long as you Love them in your heart,
They’ll never fade away!"




Copyright © jillian_phan ... [ 2005-01-28 16:23:56]
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Re: (((_ANGEL-ANJIL-JILL_))) (User Rating: 1 )
by hellsfallenangel on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 04:30:26 PM AEST
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nice poem it is true what u say at the end well g2g bye



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Re: (((_ANGEL-ANJIL-JILL_))) (User Rating: 1 )
by jillian_phan on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 04:38:16 PM AEST
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I'm going to post a comment on my own poem:: the entire meaning, is that .. ... she had no one to turn to, no one who would listen, no one to help her, so the last person she turned to was the big man, and basically ... .....


Re: (((_ANGEL-ANJIL-JILL_))) (User Rating: 1 )
by Jezabel on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 05:05:37 PM AEST
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nice story luv


Re: (((_ANGEL-ANJIL-JILL_))) (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhymingron on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 06:29:52 PM AEST
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It put a lump in my throat and a tear in my eye. A very good poem.




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