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Array ( [sid] => 92069 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Black Rose [time] => 2005-04-23 23:55:58 [hometext] => [bodytext] => With this black rose my heart is changing
Nothing is what I thought it was.
My love is changing, my life is changing,
If I don't hurt you, I hurt another.

I love you both, but I still love another.
Is this love or something more?
I always want to be with you,
But this lore won't work.
I don't wish to hurt anone,
But in the end I am the one who cries,
You both will go about your life,
When I am left here to die.

Die here is what I sall do.
I do not want to hurt you,
Rather hurt myself.
My love for you was always true,
Until I met another, not much like you.
I feel I can not talk about what really hurts inside.
The other is willing to listen, and you are not.
I can not find a way not to hurt anyone, so I have made my decision,
I must die

I can not live with both of you
And I can not live without.
So my conclusion still rest at
Tomorrow I take my life.

Though you both will be sad for a while,
You must see why I did this.
I did this for my love to you both
And thus to be nothing more

At least I won't hurt anymore.
Yet I can not help but think there has to be a better way.
I thought this over and over, and ten times more,
I think of both of you and your lore to me.
I wish I can have both,
But I can't even have thee.

With this last note to yo uboth I say fare well.
Never to be with you.
I can not help but think we might have made it,
Yet my feelings always fade it.
I know this is all my fault and I am the one to blame.
But by the time you have this not and you want to put me to shame,
I will be asleep, never to wake again.

I bid thee fare well and a good life.
Please, just don't forget our love,
And how we helped each other out.
To both of you remmeber I still love you.
Yet I can not have both so now I am left without.
Fare thee well my good friends, and even my foes,
I am left to die, without any woes. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Lenore_Poe15 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Black Rose

Contributed by Lenore_Poe15 on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 11:55:58 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



With this black rose my heart is changing
Nothing is what I thought it was.
My love is changing, my life is changing,
If I don't hurt you, I hurt another.

I love you both, but I still love another.
Is this love or something more?
I always want to be with you,
But this lore won't work.
I don't wish to hurt anone,
But in the end I am the one who cries,
You both will go about your life,
When I am left here to die.

Die here is what I sall do.
I do not want to hurt you,
Rather hurt myself.
My love for you was always true,
Until I met another, not much like you.
I feel I can not talk about what really hurts inside.
The other is willing to listen, and you are not.
I can not find a way not to hurt anyone, so I have made my decision,
I must die

I can not live with both of you
And I can not live without.
So my conclusion still rest at
Tomorrow I take my life.

Though you both will be sad for a while,
You must see why I did this.
I did this for my love to you both
And thus to be nothing more

At least I won't hurt anymore.
Yet I can not help but think there has to be a better way.
I thought this over and over, and ten times more,
I think of both of you and your lore to me.
I wish I can have both,
But I can't even have thee.

With this last note to yo uboth I say fare well.
Never to be with you.
I can not help but think we might have made it,
Yet my feelings always fade it.
I know this is all my fault and I am the one to blame.
But by the time you have this not and you want to put me to shame,
I will be asleep, never to wake again.

I bid thee fare well and a good life.
Please, just don't forget our love,
And how we helped each other out.
To both of you remmeber I still love you.
Yet I can not have both so now I am left without.
Fare thee well my good friends, and even my foes,
I am left to die, without any woes.




Copyright © Lenore_Poe15 ... [ 2005-04-23 23:55:58]
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Re: Black Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 12:11:50 AM AEST
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The flow was iffy in the beginning but got better as you progressed through the poem. The message and emotion is strong and well felt though. i love the twist you added with the last line. It was somewhat unexpected. again, very nicely done.




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