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Array ( [sid] => 92080 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My dreamy mid afternoon encounter with you... [time] => 2005-04-24 05:52:28 [hometext] => To the one from far away that makes my heart feel love again... [bodytext] => As I lay amidst the evergreens
In the flower scented meadow
The sun swelters high above
As the clouds start to shadow

The wind gently blows
Caressing my soft skin
As my eyes close deeper
Images of you flow within

I imagine us together
Besides a sparkling blue lagoon
Holding one another
In the breezy mid afternoon

Sparks of passion burn
Igniting the dying embers
Uplifting my desires
Feelings like this I can't remember

I look into your mystical eyes
My desires burn deeper
I yearn for your love
For you're my heart's sole keeper

Night falls as we lay together
Under the blanket of stars above
A beautiful shining star flickers
Burning with the fuels of our love

Arousing from my dreams
As happy as I could be
These happy memories remain
Of the encounter between you and me



[comments] => 10 [counter] => 299 [topic] => 14 [informant] => mina-1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 28 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )
My dreamy mid afternoon encounter with you...

Contributed by mina-1 on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 05:52:28 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



As I lay amidst the evergreens
In the flower scented meadow
The sun swelters high above
As the clouds start to shadow

The wind gently blows
Caressing my soft skin
As my eyes close deeper
Images of you flow within

I imagine us together
Besides a sparkling blue lagoon
Holding one another
In the breezy mid afternoon

Sparks of passion burn
Igniting the dying embers
Uplifting my desires
Feelings like this I can't remember

I look into your mystical eyes
My desires burn deeper
I yearn for your love
For you're my heart's sole keeper

Night falls as we lay together
Under the blanket of stars above
A beautiful shining star flickers
Burning with the fuels of our love

Arousing from my dreams
As happy as I could be
These happy memories remain
Of the encounter between you and me







Copyright © mina-1 ... [ 2005-04-24 05:52:28]
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Re: My dreamy mid afternoon encounter with you... (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 06:04:19 AM AEST
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wow beautiful and sweet.
awsome


Re: My dreamy mid afternoon encounter with you... (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 06:37:34 AM AEST
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oh wow! not one single bad word or line in this superb piece i love reading your work i feel like you set scenes so well..

i love the way you mix the setting with your dreams.. well done mina this poem is truely amazing!!!!

rod


Re: My dreamy mid afternoon encounter with you... (User Rating: 1 )
by mysonnet on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 06:49:49 AM AEST
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oh my goodness.
this poem is well written. beautiful and dreamy. gr8 job!


Re: My dreamy mid afternoon encounter with you... (User Rating: 1 )
by dvsnme816 on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 07:21:14 AM AEST
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This poem was extravagant, it feels as though the words are whispered into my ear. Images are flowing into my head also, Sue. Great one girl, I see you never lose your touch when it comes to poetry. Thanks for the poem Sue.

XOXOXO
Alex


Re: My dreamy mid afternoon encounter with you... (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 08:48:21 AM AEST
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excellent poem , well written


Re: My dreamy mid afternoon encounter with you... (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 11:33:15 AM AEST
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This is really romantic and beautiful!

Scott


Re: My dreamy mid afternoon encounter with you... (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 09:51:41 PM AEST
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I'M STILL TRYING TO FIGURE OUT WHICH IS PRETTIER,THIS LOVELY POEM OR YOU'RE SO BEAUTIFUL SELF?! A TIE I WOULD HAVE TO SAY,BECAUSE BOTH SHARE A BEAUTY THAT REFLECT A N IMAGE THAT'S LOVELIER THAN WORDS MAY EVER SAY!!! A HEART HITTER WITH NO DOUBT,GIVES ME A FEELING THAT WOULD BE SO HARD TO LIVE WITHOUT!!!!

Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!!!


Re: My dreamy mid afternoon encounter with you... (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 06:45:54 AM AEST
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Wow my friend this is such a awesome write. there is so much love and longing for love in this write. I canít relate to this piece so much. I canít wait to get out of Iraq and go home to find a love I hope is still their. This really touched me and thank you for these words from your heart to the paper. Take careÖSteve


Re: My dreamy mid afternoon encounter with you... (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 10:10:09 AM AEST
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Wonderful write

Love Angelxxxx


Re: My dreamy mid afternoon encounter with you... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 3rd January 2013 @ 10:11:45 PM AEST
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B E A UUUUUUUUUUUUUU T I F U L!!!




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