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Array ( [sid] => 92094 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => On June 1st of this Year [time] => 2005-04-24 10:17:15 [hometext] => A thought I had last night about my girlfriend [bodytext] => I wish I could take back everything that I have ever said that hurt you
I wish I could have another one of our "important talks"

But thats not going to happen
Since you didnt make it thought ther night
I just hope you didnt feel much pain,
When you died

I still can remember the call
When I picked up the phone and it was the hospital
And they told me that you was in a bad car crash
And that you had died instanly

I just wish I would have said I love you
And gave you a kiss
Insteas of being ***** at you
Over something so childish

The women told me that you was under the influence of drugs
I just sat there and started weeping
I told you earlier that day that drugs was going to kill you

I just wish I wasnt right
I just wish I couls hold you in my arms just one more time
I just wish I could have been their to say good-bye

There is not one day that goes by
That your not in my thoughts

It has be so hard for me the past month it has been hell
I told you if you died
I would be able to handle it

That I would have to join you as well
You dont have to worry anymore
Because in a second or two
I will be with you

People thought I was stronger then what I was
Then they found out that
I couldnt handle the presure of the world by myself anymore

When little Brandi hung herself
On June 1st of that year
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On June 1st of this Year

Contributed by apcfan on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 10:17:15 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I wish I could take back everything that I have ever said that hurt you
I wish I could have another one of our "important talks"

But thats not going to happen
Since you didnt make it thought ther night
I just hope you didnt feel much pain,
When you died

I still can remember the call
When I picked up the phone and it was the hospital
And they told me that you was in a bad car crash
And that you had died instanly

I just wish I would have said I love you
And gave you a kiss
Insteas of being ***** at you
Over something so childish

The women told me that you was under the influence of drugs
I just sat there and started weeping
I told you earlier that day that drugs was going to kill you

I just wish I wasnt right
I just wish I couls hold you in my arms just one more time
I just wish I could have been their to say good-bye

There is not one day that goes by
That your not in my thoughts

It has be so hard for me the past month it has been hell
I told you if you died
I would be able to handle it

That I would have to join you as well
You dont have to worry anymore
Because in a second or two
I will be with you

People thought I was stronger then what I was
Then they found out that
I couldnt handle the presure of the world by myself anymore

When little Brandi hung herself
On June 1st of that year




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Re: On June 1st of this Year (User Rating: 1 )
by B-Randy on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 01:57:06 PM AEST
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I'm so sorry about what happened to your girlfriend. It's hard to think that we can't always protect the ones we love from harm. I hope that in time you will heal, but I doubt that all the scars will fade away. I'm sure that she knows you love her and miss her. Stay Strong.


Re: On June 1st of this Year (User Rating: 1 )
by Kazzy1231 on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 09:36:22 AM AEST
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Good write!
R.I.P Brandi!




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