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Seaton Castle
On an unmapped land of mystery
Stands a castle of opaque stone;
A sinister wind blows frantic,
Tossing dead leaves, aimlessly blown.
A man, a creature, an ancient beast
Glides through the castle without walking;
When he speaks, I hear quiet groans
Of faceless voices talking.
His eyes, as if lit by darkness
To never see the sun again,
Penetrates my surface thoughts
And renders me weak within.
As his guest, he gives me his bed,
That strokes my body with a lustful mood;
The moon emerges like a ghost
Illuminating naked forms that crave my blood for food.
The lonely air inside his room
Craved the darkness he unfurled;
Hideous is he who takes my life
Into a squalid din, of his fetid world.
Outside, wolves howl in restless rhythm,
Obedient to their dark master;
I was welcomed to Seaton Castle,
Whose occupants cannot quench their evil hunger.
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