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Don't Make Daddy Cry
You do so many things
That make me smile;
Sing and dance
With your innocent glance
My little dark eyed child.
Don/'/t make daddy cry,
When you say you love me
And reach up to hug me;
Don/'/t make daddy cry
When you need me less each day,
Busy finding your own way.
You do so many things
That make me smile;
Don/'/t stop playing in the sand,
There/'/s plenty of time to be a man,
You/'/re my baby boy for just a while.
Don/'/t make daddy cry,
When you say you love me
And reach up to hug me;
Don/'/t make daddy cry
When you need me less each day,
Busy finding your own way.
Daddy cries inside a little
When you say you/'/ve solved a riddle,
Daddy cries inside a little
Thinking back to that toothless smile
That would greet me from the cradle.
Don/'/t make daddy cry,
When you say you love me
And reach up to hug me;
Don/'/t make daddy cry
When you need me less each day,
Busy finding your own way.
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