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Teva Mtn Deja Vue
The planting of a kiss
the build up of bliss
a moan ignites
as a bodies shake in fits
the first time
the revelation oh so sensually sated
on a hot night
a perfect
landing on cherries
lips on fire
love is inflamed
to soon Sparks exploded
now motionless yet still engaged
the wobbling legs
the naked pause
the once unknown
will for ever be remembered
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