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The Thirst
schizophrenic flesh
cracks and drifts in the breeze
a gemini has no constant
for ever everything is always changing
todays line is yesterdays memory
come tomorrow who will I be
I exist as a ghostly apparition
unable to move on
not knowing what is real
I thought I was driving
but how can that be
if I am only a wheel
I cringe at my reflection
as I mingle with the others
playing the game is very disturbing
I do not want anything
just got a feeling I should be doing more
and I do want to be somebody
you can see the hunger
in the ravines of my mind
but you can not know the thirst of my need
whispering moans fall like snow flakes
vortex of existence needs surgery
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