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MadMan Waters
Never met a girl like her before
rocking film star features
using that mis direction
so I never knew what was happening
I dared to dream
that we could dive deep
never to be found
as we traversed the ocean
The bliss ran cold
and like an addict I wanted more
but when I turned the tap
all it did was drip
there was no more emotion
look what this has done to me
Illusion is my drug she is all that I need
confusing me by keep coming around
I come alive
every time she lets me down
you have got to get in
before you can get out
and once you get in
you got to deal with all the doubts
but
none of that matters
because all I can think about is her now
I am a no man
living in a no mans land
trapped and living life in reverse
trying to hang on
as she comes back once again
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