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Suffocating
Contributed by
Angelica
on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 11:06:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Suffocating
Need a breath
Of fresh air
Life or Death
Situation
No destruction, no creation
So then
die a little
live a little
hurt yourself to feel a little
Pain
Can go a long way
And your
Brain
Can be a strong thing
And you
Don't have to be trapped
Let me give you the key
Here
Now you can be free
Tear
Running
Down
Your
Cheek
Why are you sad?
What could be so bad?
Things are not that bleak
Hush.
Just need a breath.
Copyright ©
Angelica
... [
2005-07-03 23:06:52]
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Re: Suffocating
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by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 11:13:29 PM AEST
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| i really enjoyed the style of writing in this poem .. good job! |
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