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Your Window's Wide Open
Contributed by
Benny14
on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 02:03:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Your windows wide open
And I pray that a breeze finds its way inside
There it resides, hiding but mystified by your crying
As am I
Caught between your breath, a stream
Faithfully concedes a path to your shape unseen
The light inquiringly beams, as if to question your means
Though I, I find the answers belie
A false sensitivity masked by security
Docilely complied for too long intuitively
You must escape eternity, wretched eternity
Only a deity must suffer this absurdity
Down the short-but-sweet path go I
So stop your crying, death defying, and immortality vying
Sit back, relax, and enjoy the ride
Copyright ©
Benny14
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2005-07-04 02:03:32]
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Re: Your Window's Wide Open
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 01:36:52 AM AEST
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Beautifull words of wisdom.
huggs,
emy |
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