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A Life of Red
Contributed by
Beni
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Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 10:33:08 AM in AEST
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Left in darkness,
Why do I do this?
Life is just a pit of lies,
And I am trapped in the middle.
So many lies,
I can't escape,
Never-ending thoughts,
The never leave me alone.
I let the red river,
Inside of me flow,
Setting all my troubles free,
Into the outside world.
Strangers staring,
Red stripes across my wrist,
They judge me,
and I'm dying inside.
Will no one help me?
All they do is stare,
Stare at what could soon be,
My suicide.
Copyright ©
Beni
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2005-07-04 10:33:08]
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Re: A Life of Red
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by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 10:44:49 AM AEST
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I would have agreed with you, maybe, two months ago.
Then, I felt that no one really cared until they see the blood flow, and that deep down, they are cold robots, feeling nothing that we so painfully try to restrain.
However, I guess, that its in what point of view we look at. Slashing our wrists will only bring pain upon ourselves and since no one would even ever care, we're seriously wasting our time and effort, or whatevr..
Good luck to you, and I really like your poem.
:)
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Re: A Life of Red
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by FIX on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 01:43:10 PM AEST
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yea its true - the only pain is yours
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Re: A Life of Red
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by FIX on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 01:43:27 PM AEST
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yea its true - the only pain is yours
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Re: A Life of Red
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by HOPE4ME2 on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 03:31:08 PM AEST
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One must hold on to hope, for there are those who care. Maybe it's your pain that keeps you moving forward, but please hold fast to tomorrow.
Blessings
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