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The Spark Inside
Contributed by
Unaekseveer1
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Tuesday, 23rd July 2002 @ 10:16:04 AM in AEST
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Deep inside us all
Theres a spark that always smoulders
Crushed beneath the weight
Of the world upon our shoulders
Deep inside us all
This spark thatll always glow
Fuelling our dreams
Drying tears of pain as they flow
Deep inside us all
When this spark becomes a flame
This moment is for us
To begin playing this life, this game
Deep inside us all
As we play this game of life
The flame that burns within
Fends off trouble, melting strife
Deep inside us all
When this flame becomes a blaze
Its time to turn about
To ponder riches within our gaze
Deep inside us all
This fear of life and not of dying
Keeps the burning flame
From expanding, never trying
Deep inside us all
We can feed the glowing embers
With the air they need to breathe
Until they burst, then they end us
Let it burn free
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Unaekseveer1
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Re: The Spark Inside
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by Kassidi on
Tuesday, 23rd July 2002 @ 01:14:42 PM AEST
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Very heartfelt poem! I touched my heart deeply and I know it will touch other. Absolutely Lovely! :D
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Re: The Spark Inside
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Tuesday, 23rd July 2002 @ 09:07:59 PM AEST
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Hi Kassidi,
It makes me happy to hear other people sometimes understand what's going on in my heart, as I struggle to get it myself most of the time.
Thankyou for your kind words
Dean |
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Re: The Spark Inside
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 24th July 2002 @ 10:14:42 PM AEST
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Like Kassidi, your write touched me as well... Do you mind if I print it off and keep it to read from time to time? let me know. It truly is inspirational...
Always,
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Re: The Spark Inside
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 12:41:16 AM AEST
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Hey Daniela, It would honour me greatly to think someone wanted to actually keep some of my writing.
I wish you could see how much you've just made me smile!
Many thankyous
Dean |
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Re: The Spark Inside
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by ShadowsCloud on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 07:09:14 AM AEST
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Dean, yet another great poem. I love it. It is very inspirational.
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Re: The Spark Inside
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 07:27:30 AM AEST
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Why thankyou Candice,
You're too kind!
Did you tell your Mum what I said?
With love
Dean:-)
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Re: The Spark Inside
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by ShadowsCloud on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 07:40:38 AM AEST
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Dean, Yes I did. She said thank you. She likes it just as much as I do when poeple like her poetry.
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Re: The Spark Inside
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 01:51:17 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful, the depth of
this poem is uniquely beautiful Dean
You have a masterpiece here, That
would make a great forum topic
as well, "Why do some of us harbour
such fear as success"? I really
enjoyed this write alot it's very
touching Thanks for sharing it
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: The Spark Inside
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 08:20:56 PM AEST
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Why thankyou for your very kind words of praise Cookie, most apprecaited.
I think maybe the fear of becoming, what could be seen by some as, successful in life is because if we did we'd have nothing to moan about and nothing about us for others to feel sorry for! Making us no longer the centre of attention which we once imagined ourselves to be!
If theres nothing wrong with you or your life, then people don't wonder how you are doing, so you get forgotten!
Thanks again
with love
Dean:-) |
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