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Wet Dreams
Contributed by
Mick_Puttock
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Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 07:40:00 PM in AEST
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My four children although they are small
They live in their swimmers out in the pool
Every spare minute that they can get
they now spend it, SPLASH, getting wet
As soon as they get home from school
all they want is to be really cool
so it's into the water they will go
and believe me, WOW they are not slow
When they start to look like my dear ol dad
with wrinkles even on the littlest lad
(notice I didn't say "like their father" dear
but believe me, I am getting near...)
they still stay in that water so cold
despite the sky now turning to gold
As it gets dark, and the sky loses its hue
and I have four littlies with lips turning blue
it's to the hot showers to warm up their crust
then to the table, for now food is a must
I'm sure if they could, I know where they'd be
as soon as they have finished their tea
but it is now late and this mean dad says not yet
so they're off to their beds to dream of the wet
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oops if my dad reads this
well what can I say
hey you're mentioned within
that'll make your day...lol
Mick Puttock
Copyright ©
Mick_Puttock
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2003-01-08 19:40:00]
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Re: Wet Dreams
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 07:58:17 PM AEST
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| Mick,this was soooooooo cute I could just see them wrinkled & wet from swimming all day! Loved this,since I have two of my own! Christina |
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Re: Wet Dreams
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 08:01:29 PM AEST
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LOL....I remember this one so well, Mick... it still brings a huge smile to my dial.. thinking of you and your wet dreams..lmao....
You need to find some time to write more, Mick... I really miss your poetry...
(((hugs)))
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Re: Wet Dreams
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 08:02:33 PM AEST
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Dearest Mick @-<-<<-
Adorable! I remember this one lol Soooo cute! Great Write my friend!! Huggs and love to you and the kiddies
Always Nessa |
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Re: Wet Dreams
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by venkat on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 02:38:13 AM AEST
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| it is simply beautiful to spend a nice day .with your children !...thank you mick.! .its so cute...venkat |
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Re: Wet Dreams
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by OreO on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 03:59:57 AM AEST
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I remember having a conversation about wrinkled fingers lmao!!! This is so cute Mick! Great write! It's been a while since you posted, hope to see more soon...
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Re: Wet Dreams
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 05:32:58 PM AEST
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HI MICK.
THIS IS A GOOD WRITE,I LOVE THE FAMILY MESSAGE HERE,LET YOUR KIDS CONTINUE TO HAVE FUN
THEY CAN ONLY BE A CHILD ONCE.FUN, FUN, FUN.I REALY LIKE THIS.RICHARD CAMPBELL |
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Re: Wet Dreams
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 08:05:28 AM AEST
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| I am reading this after watching four of my five..yes....five children lol...They were swimming for most of the day as it was so hot..They wouldn't even come out for their iceblocks..so they dined in lol...And yes..Love those wrinkles:)Very nice write... |
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Re: Wet Dreams
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 06:58:12 PM AEST
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Mick How you find time to write such good stuff and do all my corrections beats me.
By the way, I got the specs. |
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Re: Wet Dreams
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by LadyDama on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 05:27:15 AM AEST
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| this is precious... i love this poem :) |
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Re: Wet Dreams
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by riverofwords on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 08:12:11 AM AEST
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oh happy days .loved this brings back great memories
way to go
peace be yuor journey
terry
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Re: Wet Dreams
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by norm on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 04:46:37 PM AEST
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you reminded me when i was young.
we dunked ok, but in the hudson river.
you sure brought it back..the thrill of
the SPLASH...
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Re: Wet Dreams
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by EyesRustedShut on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 02:14:32 AM AEST
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| This title is misleading ha... nice description... If you like good music and you have some extra time check out the music of Monday In London at www.mondayinlondon.com |
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Re: Wet Dreams
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by a_bear on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 11:08:14 PM AEST
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| yep Mick ya had me fooled...with your title...naughty little lad. hehehehe. Wicked old woman that I am I ran right to it, too. It is sooooo cute. How in the world do find the time to write? |
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Re: Wet Dreams
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by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 03:55:27 PM AEST
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LOL, Mick, this was adorable. :) I miss being a child and getting to run and jump and play and swim. I love this bit of poetry for it's ability to take me back to better days. Thank you mick.
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Re: Wet Dreams
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 07:58:59 PM AEST
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| Awsome poem!! I loved it. It was really cute. Not what i thought it ws going to be about in reading the title, lol. ;-D |
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Re: Wet Dreams
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by critterhideaway on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 01:45:19 AM AEST
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| Neat bring back memories of four kids in the pool or the creek |
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Re: Wet Dreams
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by needledancing on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 10:40:54 PM AEST
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| Well you fished me in with the title. Still sounds like you have some real polywogs when it comes to the water.Good write. |
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Re: Wet Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 05:18:10 PM AEST
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some marvellous imagery here.
-phil |
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