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Wrap Me Up
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 09:10:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Undying light
Of which you
Shine forth
Mesmerize my eyes
With such
Beauty and magic
Will you wrap me up
In your warmth
So the sinister chill
Of my darkness
May take its leave
For just a moment
I want to feel
Your heart
Beat in tune
With mine
An everlasting
Melody
Oh sweet love
Take my hand
And lay me softly
Upon this most
Sacred bed
Wrap me up
In all that
Is yours
For Ive waited
A lifetime
To have you ****** me
Apart of my fading soul.
Copyright ©
pUnKa_RaCh
... [
2005-07-04 21:10:55]
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Re: Wrap Me Up
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by Flyinglow on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 09:22:50 PM AEST
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| Great job, i especially like the last line, it really speaks to me |
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Re: Wrap Me Up
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 11:04:45 PM AEST
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Heartfelt plea!!
Jenni |
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Re: Wrap Me Up
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by wizard on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 11:19:33 PM AEST
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very nicely written.
great flow and composition, and the topic, of course, is one for the ages
i especially like this stanza:
"Will you wrap me up
In your warmth…
So the sinister chill
Of my darkness
May take its leave
For just a moment"
thats very strong.
great job...wiz |
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Re: Wrap Me Up
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 12:56:24 AM AEST
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A heartfelt and emotional plea. May ur heart find the true love that it desires.
A powerful, deep and sad write.
Hugs,
Dreamer |
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Re: Wrap Me Up
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 08:26:46 PM AEST
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Great.. gentle flow Rach..
the last two stanzas are fantastic..
I felt every word!
Great write!
B |
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