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~~InTo YoU...~~
Contributed by
chaos_01
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Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 03:58:39 AM in AEST
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~~InTo YoU~~
Love is not tender
Love is not doubtful
Love is not spiteful
Love takes no offence
Love is not jealous
Love is when I watch you sleep
So peaceful and so still
You held me tight not ready to let me go
I gave you a piece of me
Known that I wont get it back
The butterflies awake when youre in my mind
I try to stand as your soft gentle hands touch the surface of my skin
Your smile so warm
Your eyes so bright
Its hard not to touch you when youre so close
Every part of me so into you
But the real question to my love is
Are you into me?
~~ I LUB YOU! ~~
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Re: ~~InTo YoU...~~
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by Eclipse on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:44:03 AM AEST
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quite a good poem, i really liked the line 'the butterflies awake when you're in my mind'
thanks for sharing, i've been going through the exact same thing
good luck with this :)
eclipse x0x
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Re: ~~InTo YoU...~~
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by ducki on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 05:06:09 AM AEST
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| Really good. Im sort of in the same position, only I know what the answer is. |
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