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Just Once
Contributed by
Dawny
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Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:36:13 AM in AEST
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For just one minute, in just one day
Can I be number one
Can my needs come first just once
Would that be so wrong?
I admit its by my choice alone
That I come last in line
But just once maybe they could say
Its my turn first this time
I feel like a family referee
Doing this and solving that
Just once could I sit on the bench
Do nothing but relax
Just once walk in my shoes
With the decisions that I make
Each day living selflessly
All give and never take
The stress becomes enormous
Resentment pouring through
Just once let me matter
Come first instead of you
Copyright ©
Dawny
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2005-07-05 04:36:13]
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Re: Just Once
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by mia on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:41:35 AM AEST
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I think that everyone needs a little time to relax. I think that it is a great write
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Re: Just Once
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by Winterland on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 09:44:04 AM AEST
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As a mother of four, I can't tell you how many times those same thoughts have gone through my head. Great job!
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Re: Just Once
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 11:19:42 AM AEST
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sometimes you just need to take that time tell the man here your having daddy day and off you go when the sun comes up till it goes down, go get a hair do or buy some new clothes have lunch with a friend make a day of it and do that at least once a week you need to life wont fall apart if you go for the day(though sometimes the guys think so) smiles
I loved the emotion you put into this write
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Re: Just Once
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by Asthenia on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 12:29:13 PM AEST
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| this was insightful (from a guys view), when I get married and have a kid(s) (assuming that day comes) I'm gonna remember these words...good job |
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Re: Just Once
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 05:04:54 PM AEST
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| I think a wife, mother, lover, guardian, etc need at least 2 completely free days a month. Everyone has to have some down time where all the responsibility does not weigh on YOUR shoulders and you can pamper yourself with whatever makes you happy. The world will not end if you do, trust me. hugs, Rita |
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Re: Just Once
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by Kie on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 08:44:04 AM AEST
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You deserve at least a day filled with "Just onces".
This one touched my heart. You give so much, I hope that it will be given back to you many times over.
A wonderful poem Dawny.
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