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The Eternal Life
Contributed by
Sexi_Lexi
on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 06:36:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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The day goes on.
on....on....
As i watch
It goes away from me
I don't feel the pain anymore
How can it hurt me?
When i don't exist
I look upon life
With a new twist
I feel the numbness
Even though i don't survive
The people hear
Yet they only lie
How do i feel
When i am empty inside
I think of my death
As my life carries on
Not wishing for me
I know that it will end
Ending in eternity
It was eternal
It still will be
The pain flows through
It will never stop
Just as i see hope
The fear comes back again
eternal...........
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Sexi_Lexi
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2005-07-05 06:36:16]
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Re: The Eternal Life
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 11:49:57 AM AEST
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dont lose your faith just hold on and push forward you will do fine this is very emotional write keep posting Ill keep reading
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Re: The Eternal Life
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 12:16:36 PM AEST
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Keep up your faith everything will work out.. nice poem .
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Re: The Eternal Life
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 06:09:54 PM AEST
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i enjoyed your poem.
fear is not always a bad thing...it keeps us out of dangerous situations...
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Re: The Eternal Life
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by Belcha on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 05:12:07 AM AEST
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Never Fear Joey's Here !!
You certainly have a gift for understanding and sharing your emotional thoughts and feelings, keep up the good work.
peace, Joey B. |
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