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A love for the ages
Contributed by
trini
on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 10:13:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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I do not know how Id live without you
Its like living without breath from the mouth
You are my breath, you are always there through
All the times I would not dare move on
And the tears would roll slowly down my face
A smile that captivated my heart.
Somehow you seemed to bring out the real me.
A stranded soul upon the darkened night.
You were there to guide me into the light.
I owe you my happiness and my joy.
I shall give you one thousand shining stars.
One thousand memories of happiness.
One thousand days, hours, minutes for you.
A love to move all of the seven seas
I will love you till I live without you
Copyright ©
trini
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2005-07-05 10:13:38]
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Re: A love for the ages
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 11:31:44 AM AEST
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beautiful write your heart is on your sleeve
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Re: A love for the ages
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by trini on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 11:34:01 PM AEST
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You idiot this is a sonnet not a haiku!
this only shows how much you know about poetry! stick to free verse. |
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