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Contributed by
MnMnMsrcool
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Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 10:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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It was weird you know,
seeing you like that,
all run down,
depressed,
you were empty,
there was nothing left except emptiness,
you were there but you weren't,
you had no sole left,
all that was left was your body,
your mind,
your heart,
there had to be something wrong,
you had to have something left,
but who was i talking about,
there was no one there,
there was no one around,
it took me a couple minutes to figure out,
i was talking about myself.
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MnMnMsrcool
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2003-01-08 22:40:00]
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Re: No Title
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by cryingonmyporch on
Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 08:48:50 PM AEST
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DEEP
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Re: No Title
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by tease_whizz on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 12:03:49 PM AEST
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| i like this a lot - deep and with a lot of meaning that isn't obvious like in other poems. great write, keep them coming, Kate x |
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