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Wasting My Time
Contributed by
Bones
on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 03:21:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Broken and frozen in time,
Lost and looking for rhyme,
Nothings here but my own pain.
My mind wonders through this rain.
My eyes travel the stars above.
My heart stopped beating for love.
Perceive this the way you will,
But listen, heres the deal.
Theres only one way to find the truth.
And its in all of you.
Shocking the nation with the power within.
Broken and frozen in time, are you without sin?
Im only here to live for one,
Now that this new venture has begun.
Burning my skin until its dry.
Why cant you just see beyond his lie?
Are you that blind?
Are you too good for my kind?
Jumping on subjects, becoming discursive again.
My ways wont change even with a loss, my friend.
I know why youre here, and thats why I want you to go.
Youve destroyed every thing that I know.
Nothing means a thing.
Writing straight from the brain.
You thought the deeper you went, the deeper Id crawl.
Well listen here, Im not here to watch everyone fall.
Trying to start this new life,
With new hopes,
With new ideas,
With new friends,
With a new home,
With a new job,
With a life renewed.
And you just keep bringing me down.
Making be leaving a deep ground.
Get it, dont smear it, dont swear it, just leave it.
After 5 months, youd think youd get the idea.
But youre still holding on!
Im not going to do this again.
This is the last time I waste my time.
This is the last time I waste a rhyme.
Copyright ©
Bones
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2005-07-05 15:21:32]
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Re: Wasting My Time
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 03:41:47 PM AEST
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| i thought this was clever, powerful and emotional. it was a very good write and i love the last two lines, great job. |
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Re: Wasting My Time
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 03:45:50 PM AEST
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| Very well thought out writing keep up the good work you now have a new fan |
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Re: Wasting My Time
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by sprinter27 on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 12:38:07 PM AEST
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good write, i liked reading this one. and yes, there are always going to be people that try to drag you down, i am sorry to tell you. i know what it's like to have people who just don't understand it. i am sorry that you have to put up with this, but hey, it brought out a good write! keep up the good work and i wish you luck!
~sprints |
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