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Lost In Nature's Show
Contributed by
xxbreathlessx
on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 03:48:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Crystal droplets descend from the sky,
Bringing my every pore alive,
Each taking a breath of rejuvenation.
My ears drown sweetly in the oceans
Singing waves
And heavens heartbeats.
Drop. Drop. Drop.
As they hit the floor they break,
Just as all hearts do.
In the magic of natures spell
Im revived,
Finding lost breath through its touch.
My heartbeat lost in the pattern of their own,
Lost in the magic,
Lost in its song.
Transcended so many miles away from myself,
From anything thats ever held me back.
My blood spinning from its ice cold caress,
Dancing to the pitter-patter of natures off beat melody.
Im freed from earths gravity,
From my bodys weight,
From responsibilities,
Im freed from the impossible.
The only promise held to me
Is the promise that
Those pitter-patter hearts
Breaking against the floor
Will one day be my own.
But until then natures angels welcome me
To their show of Life,
Where I become nothing but a whisper in its magic.
Copyright ©
xxbreathlessx
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2005-07-05 15:48:00]
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Re: Lost In Nature's Show
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 03:54:55 PM AEST
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| I "LOVED" this poem very great writing skills you have the frist line set the tone then the last line takes it home |
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Re: Lost In Nature's Show
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:26:01 PM AEST
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... And a beautiful nature poem of your own. The imagery and words are enchanting, as the best nature poetry should be. Well done!
Andrew |
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Re: Lost In Nature's Show
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 08:16:49 PM AEST
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The whole write was amazing..
(too many lines to quote)
you couldn't fit another ounce of imagery..
spectacular..
very well written piece.
B |
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Re: Lost In Nature's Show
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by mom11159 on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 11:46:20 PM AEST
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Excellent poem I loved it so serene so beautiful so breathtaking. YOur imagery sets such a clear picture as I read your marvelous words I am in awe
Cathy |
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