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That Familiar Blanket
Contributed by
Benny14
on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 03:59:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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The cold outside has once again brought on that familiar blanket The one you wear for all occasions, frayed in all the right places Colors it once boasted like a Cape sunrise have long since faded Softening and fusing together to confirm its sage-like quality By no means is it a sad sight, for it wears its love as an old dog would its owner It always seemed to fit you like a second skin Wrapped tight around you, still shivering at first but falling into comfort You look past us all, knowing youd rather be no place else, and you smile And the world is warmer when you smile
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2005-07-05 15:59:45] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: That Familiar Blanket
(User Rating: 1 ) by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:11:09 PM AEST (User
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stunning. striking. perfect. i loved it. |
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Re: That Familiar Blanket
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:36:20 PM AEST (User
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I like your style of writing and i will read more as you post good job here buddy o'l pal |
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Re: That Familiar Blanket
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 01:46:00 AM AEST (User
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Well u may have figured it out by now but I just stumbled accross your amazing work and i can't stop till I read um all.
huggs,
smiles,
emy |
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