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He Knows the Words He Lives By
Contributed by
Benny14
on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:13:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
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He knows the words he lives by
He has studied their intricacies
He waits in hopes that the words themselves dare not displease
He waits for them as he waits for her
He stumbles over metaphors of a flower or a setting sun
He is only sure, unequivocally, shes the one
He is only sure the past and future have plowed into the present
He feels no sense of time or meaning until
He can be assured shell forever run to meet him at their doorsill
He still confuses her with language, finally abandoning words he learned in school
He confides wholly in his feeling tried and true
He pauses awhile, collects, and says Darlin, I Love You?
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2005-07-05 16:13:30]
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Re: He Knows the Words He Lives By
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:25:01 PM AEST
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Very intelligent and intriguing poem "I LOVE"
the he stumbles over metaphors its way deeper then it sounds good write 4 from me |
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Re: He Knows the Words He Lives By
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:32:46 PM AEST
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| i think this is such a sweet and honest poem. Great job! |
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Re: He Knows the Words He Lives By
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 01:52:17 AM AEST
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Aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaa
Breathe takin.
huggs, big smiles,
emy |
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