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Contributed by
mystical_illusion
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Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 11:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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My life is like a sinking boat
Where everything struggles to stay afloat.
Out to shore I yell
No one can hear me, as far as I can tell.
The water is getting cold,
A the days and nights get lonely with no one to hold.
getting tired of the same old thing,
always knowing what the next day will bring.
My crew all abandoned me,
Left me here to die in this never ending sea.
Just when the tide is about to turn,
Another part of my boat begins to burn.
So many things out of reach,
Never going to make it to that golden beach.
Try so hard, but everything stays the same,
My body's getting sick of this swimming game.
My life is like a sinking boat
Where everything struggles to stay afloat.
But for today I will continue to swim
In case tomorrow doesnt seem so dim.
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2003-01-08 23:20:00]
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Re: No Title
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by boy_in_blue on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 10:52:56 PM AEST
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| i love verse, and you certainly do your rhymes justice. i love the imagery in you poem as well, it moved me. good job, keep writing! |
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Re: No Title
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 07:50:18 PM AEST
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