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hurt of child
Contributed by
spazz911
on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 09:30:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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earsplitting laughter
breaks throught the air
runs through the crowd
tears streaming through
breaking in doorways
they all stop and stare
and she slams through the room
and hides in her cube
so many problems
what answer is this
to run in and hide
forever amiss
she trys oh so hard
but life keeps beating her down
pushes her in
and suffacates her sound
fallen so deep
she can no longer sleep
tearing at soul
she can no longer breathe
hears in her head
that its better to stop
shes tried so hard
not to cut her wrist
such emotions
are so stong
they suck her in
where she doesn't belong
they overpower wat actions she takes
as she reaches for those golden gates
reached with rusty iron cates
driven to by childish bates
Copyright ©
spazz911
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2005-07-05 21:30:20]
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Re: hurt of child
(User Rating: 1 )
by demonika_911 on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 09:43:45 PM AEST
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| I thought this was a really impacting poem, there are so many chicks out there who feel like this. Good on ya, keep up the great poetry! |
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Re: hurt of child
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 09:58:32 PM AEST
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Very well written indeed.
Heart-wrenching and tragic. You potrayed your emotions well.
Hope to you. |
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