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He's Not Coming Back
Contributed by
demonika_911
on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 09:33:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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In the deep confines of my heart
My life has been torn apart
I try to put on a happy face
But I can't erase time and space
I miss his face, his eyes, his skin
My heart is tearing apart from within
I need his touch to ease my pain
But he's not coming back
I'm going insane!
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2005-07-05 21:33:17]
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Re: He's Not Coming Back
(User Rating: 1 )
by Shorty_88 on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 09:49:22 PM AEST
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Hey Shanny
You did a fantastic job and i think Johnno would be touched by this poem. Keep up the fantastic writing and i will see you at skool tomorrow.
Talk to you l8er
Tara |
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Re: He's Not Coming Back
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by Rsdemon89 on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 01:09:01 AM AEST
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Sensational, touching... and i felt a lot of warmth... you must of been quite close, I can't start to think how you feel... but great work, i'll read this from time to time, when i am feeling happy. :-)
~Rsdemon89~ |
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