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Take Me, Don't Break Me
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 09:46:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Take me
Dont break me
For a lovers sting
Can shake me
Take my hand from dusk till dawn
Fix my heart thats been bled and sawn
I ask you please to handle me with care
For Im such a small package so fragile and rare
I can love you with all this small heart
If you are gentle and dont shred it apart
I have inner scars, hidden behind my pale skin
So dont tear them any more, help me heal from within
With my small heart I will love you till I do perish
Every smile of yours is a moment I will cherish
Yes with my bruised hands I can lift you above the sky
If you take notice and dont let me pass you by
So you can take me
But dont break me
Love me
Please
Dont forsake me.
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pUnKa_RaCh
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2005-07-05 21:46:36]
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Re: Take Me, Don't Break Me
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 10:36:49 PM AEST
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| great write hits the point good ty for the comments |
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Re: Take Me, Don't Break Me
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by Heman on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 12:39:45 AM AEST
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| wonderful poem...looks like comes for ur heart!!! great work... |
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Re: Take Me, Don't Break Me
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 07:14:46 AM AEST
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its a good write
just a lil. sad thou |
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