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Within You
Contributed by
firearchdruid
on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 12:46:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I stare up at the vastness of the dark blue sky Slowly a tear trickles from my eye
The beauty and serenity is washed away Into a bottomless oblivion it will forever stay
Im stumbling in the dark I cant find where to go Searching for a light that somehow will never glow
Thoughts are easily constructed but words always seem to fall apart Is there anything that compares to an empty hollow heart
Searching for a broken memory isnt tough to do But what a person really needs to search for is within you
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Re: Within You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 01:25:56 AM AEST (User
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Short, deep and to the point. A very well written piece of poetry . I like the flow and the imagery cast. Well done. I hope to read more of ur work.
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