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Death Chant
Contributed by
bgj
on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 02:24:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Come death, eternal bearer of souls
Release me from lifes troublesome woes.
Guide me across Styxs immortal divide
To dark mysteries that there reside.
Come death, surround my heart with cold
Extinguish the fire that burns it so.
Lead my soul to endless rest
Far from lifes weary test.
Come death, give me your hand
Take me to that ethereal land.
Deep in the shadows make my bed
Ill sleep among the whispers of the dead.
Bobby G. Jarrard
Copyright 2005 by Bobby G. Jarrard
Copyright ©
bgj
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2005-07-06 02:24:34]
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Re: Death Chant
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by flamingblade on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 03:30:45 PM AEST
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what a real poem! very dark and depressing ...
I like it
keep it up |
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Re: Death Chant
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by bethers_is_my_baby on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 07:48:52 PM AEST
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| nice job here, it really sets the mood |
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Re: Death Chant
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 08:19:22 PM AEST
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| i really enjoyed this piece. It was well expressed and imagery filled. I am one who enjoys dark themes, thus my natural attraction to this piece, yet I feel you have given the reader more than what they expected. Your choice of words are eloquent and fitting. The content and structure are well fashioned. Good rhyme scheme. I feel the briefness compensates with its rich text. I am a fan of short expressive pieces, like this. I think the personification of death is very realistic and psychiological. I like that. Also spiritual. There is alot of truth here. And a lot of beauty. I simply adored this piece. Well done :) |
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Re: Death Chant
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by flamingblade on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 12:16:58 PM AEST
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| this is very good |
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