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what happened
Contributed by
confused
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Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 08:17:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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What happened to those summer days
Where we would just laze
And our presence to each other
Was all that mattered
What happened to those winter nights
When the cold was all we had to fight
And our presence to each other
Was all that mattered
What happened to those crisp fall days
When we went through that dark Goth faze
And our presence to each other
Was all that mattered
What happened to those bright spring mornings
When we would exchange our stories
And our presence to each other
Was all that mattered
What happened to us?
Now on those summer days
We fight in so many ways
And those winter nights
We have much more than the cold to fight
Remember those crisp fall days?
When we went thru that awesome faze?
That to is gone down the drain
What about those bright spring mornings?
Now we exchange rude looks
Instead of stories
What happened to us?
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Re: what happened
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by justme03 on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 10:33:04 AM AEST
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wow kate! this poem rox! i think it is liek one of ur best poems that ive read so far of urs!!
rock on! i totally could feel how u felt thru ur words and it came straight from the heart! awesome! loved it! hope everything gets better! luv ya
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Re: what happened
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 12:45:42 PM AEST
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Really good job with this girl! I like the repeated line scheme for the first half...Then how you quickened the flow for the last half. Nice expression, especially towards the end.
Scorp. |
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Re: what happened
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 09:10:53 AM AEST
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I feel this poem alot
I've been through about
the same pain good job
keep writing and I'll be your #1 fan |
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