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Look thru my eyes
Contributed by
confused
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Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 08:21:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Look thru my eyes
Look thru my eyes,
And see all the tears that I cried
Look thru my eyes,
And see all the looks that I get
Look thru my eyes,
And see the few smiles I caught
Look thru my eyes,
And see the pain I lived thru
Look thru my eyes,
And see all the laughs that I had
Look thru my eyes,
And see how many times I was mad
Look thru my eyes
And see how much I love you
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Re: Look thru my eyes
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 10:04:35 AM AEST
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mmm! great stuff!
often when i'm suffering, esecially when some one i trusted is making it happen, i think about how some-one some-where must be seeing what i'm going through...
they must be aware that i'm hurting, becuase maybe they're watching me, and every thing that's happening to me! or maybe they're just seeing in their dreams or some thing!
... well, this poem kinda triggered my thoughts from the back of my memories...
it's good stuff!
i feel like this alot sum times! |
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Re: Look thru my eyes
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by justme03 on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 10:41:41 AM AEST
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wow
this poem said like sooooo much!! (i say wow a lot lol)
kate, u rock! i wish i lived closer to u and we could b frends. love ur poems1 keep writing! :D
lylas
~Kortnie~ |
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Re: Look thru my eyes
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 03:01:30 PM AEST
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nice poem i liked it.
butterflygirl40 |
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Re: Look thru my eyes
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 09:08:47 AM AEST
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I saw through your eyes her
and it was good
the expression is great |
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