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Through MyYour Light.
Contributed by
shaba
on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 09:30:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
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We could plan a murder, or
Start a religion
Crucified souls bleeding,
A bloodstained petition
Scratched knees, and
Lessons learned
A physical metamorphosis
As scars burn
Tears shed, as
Glass onions are cut
A look into your eyes,
The stars blow up
Life taken away
So young,
Innocence left by the side
My heart feels numb
Follow me,
Down to the holy
Bless my feet, and
Hold me
We can plan a murder, or
Start a mission, shouting!
Life, is
The only religion worth living.
Copyright ©
shaba
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2005-07-06 09:30:58]
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Re: Through MyYour Light.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 08:29:07 PM AEST
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| I LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT JIM MORRISON, I REALLY LOVED YOUR STYLE WITH THIS WRITE, THE FIRST STANZA WAS AWESOME AND GRABBED MY ATTENTION, I ENJOYED THIS ALOT.VERY GOOD WRITE. |
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Re: Through MyYour Light.
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by CodyJ on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 08:39:09 PM AEST
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| heeheeheehahaHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! Drop dead gorgous write!!! kudos |
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Re: Through MyYour Light.
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by ShaBa on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 07:13:52 AM AEST
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LoL thanks for the feedback guys,
You got one crazy laugh dude :) |
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Re: Through MyYour Light.
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by vibes2go on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 06:07:07 PM AEST
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| Go to Frisco .. you can do anything there .. especially in the name of Jim Morrison.. |
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