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Satin
Contributed by
seci
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Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 02:24:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
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hable me, speak to me as if your heart is wrapped sacred in this masquerade
engage into my cocoa color eyes and like a story of its waves, watch yourself into me fade
fading, fading, fading now lost inside of me
hush
less worry
placed in my hands, i'm your wall of security
understandable that everything is moving so fast
blazing from this fire, i'm trying to erase the smoke from my past
like a rope , i may at times pull from you
not explainable
afraid to become close and like anything else i tell you, its true
this river is overflowing with these secrets that lie in our conversations
heres my heart and to invite you in , i give you the invitation
don't fall so quick into my soulful poetic mind
so therefore wait, because in the situations forced like these, you find yourself at times loving the blind
loveable
so damn loveable
touchable
embraceable
incredible
unforgetable
beautiful
my love which is so spanish felt
a chill of any summer breeze that your heart will desire to melt
un amor sus el propios, embrace yourself into me
tenga cuidado, for i will take you out of this world of misery
this love is so magical like the carpet of Aladdin
become wrapped in my masquerade where my love is soft like the
touch of satin
un tacto de mi amor en sat`en
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seci
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2005-07-06 14:24:09]
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Re: Satin
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by Unbreakable on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 09:00:41 PM AEST
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Very good write. I like the Spanish mixed in and you have a very powerful message of love. Good job, keep it up!
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Re: Satin
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 03:52:38 PM AEST
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So much going on in this deeply heartfelt write...Real depth of emotion in this one Seci...the Spanish mixed in works well too. A very honest piece. Well done.
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