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Sweet Deliverance
Contributed by
dreamer_4_eternity
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Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 04:13:56 PM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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Sweet deliverance
Deliver your riches
Show me mercy
Erase my stitches
Let your song
Enclose me faraway
Showing me the harmony
Ive longed for everyday
Enter in my heart
Bring serenity to thy soul
Only this sweet deliverance
Will once again make me whole
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2005-07-06 16:13:56]
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Re: Sweet Deliverance
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 04:37:16 PM AEST
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A sweet and inspiring piece of poetry u have here. Short, simple and sweet. I loved the flow. Well done.
Hugs,
Dreamer
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Re: Sweet Deliverance
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by Sirena_Degana on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 05:13:27 PM AEST
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| OMGOODNESS that is so pretty. |
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Re: Sweet Deliverance
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 09:09:55 PM AEST
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I liked this one very much!!!! Beautiful words, very captivating.
I like it very much
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Keep it up! |
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